Audience Feedback

       These are some of the questions that we asked our peers who are within the same age range of our target audience.

·         Is it too ambiguous? (themes, storyline)

·         Does the music go well with the shots?

·         Is it a recognisable thriller?

·         Are there any shots which don’t fit nicely with the rest of the shots?

·         Does the music create a typical thriller type atmosphere?

·         Is the editing appropriate for a thriller?

We were aware of some of the feedback that we received that was mentioned by our peers, they are:

·         Some of the shots at the beginning were grainy.

·         Add the alarm sounding to make it more realistic or change the clock. 

·         There is more in the bathroom scene then the room.

For improvement

·         In the bedroom scene to change the lighting, make the room darker but with a slit of light shining through the curtains onto Maya's face.

·         Reshoot the dream scene so the audience can recognise that it's a dream

·         Reshoot the newspaper scene to make it more realistic

·         Reshoot the end scene as they are not fully focused  

·         The blood that drops from the vase can seem too watery, experiment to see how to improve this.